Hey Daniel, your photography shows a lot of contrast between light and dark. It draws you from the dark inside of the hallway to the light and shadows from the windows. I couldn't really tell you what to do dofferent with it, but maybe play a little bit more with colors in the next few breadth pieces. Good work :)
This is a really creative, high quality picture and it looks way better than the other day (maybe because there was a glare on your computer or something like that). I like how there are a variety of tones and the lighting is really eerie but in a good way. The only thing that I would consider is the blank wall in the back...that's it though (maybe darken the shadow on that wall). I like how you are drawn into the room and how the is a meaning to it (there may not be a meaning but it looks like there could be...which is a positive). Keep up the good work and think about using a different style for your next breadth pieces.
From Tina: I really like it- the color, the light, and the overall feeling this picture evokes. The partially shown room draws the viewer in, it makes you want to know what's going on. I think it's such a creative idea for "room perspective" and very near perfect too. To improve, maybe something can be done to fix the emptiness of the left wall? thats all I can really think of... but I like it the way it already is.
The lighting in the interior of the room really draws you into the space, but the wall sort of blocks the viewer out at the same time which creates an interesting tension. I don't have a sense of clutter or hoarding as you talked about the photo, something like that could really make an interesting photograph.
the texture on the wall and the ground is great, and the picture is detailed. and the empty space on the left nicely balanced the picture. but the part at the bottom maybe a little bit too dark? good job:)
The pattern of light on the carpet really gives your eye a focal point. The texture of the bricks, the carpet, and the door add a lot of detail. The light and dark also makes the picture look complicated and interesting. I like how the room is partially concealed by the wall, because it makes me really curious about what's inside the room behind the wall. The space of carpet behind the chair is a little bit empty, and it might seem more complex with a few more plastic bags to clutter the space. I really like the picture!
I love this photo! It has a great balance and contrast. The light from the window and on the floor makes it really interesting. I also like the different texture of the walls. My favorite part is the the angle of the shot, it has a direction and makes me wonder what's behind the wall. This is a really great photo :)
Hey Daniel,
ReplyDeleteyour photography shows a lot of contrast between light and dark. It draws you from the dark inside of the hallway to the light and shadows from the windows. I couldn't really tell you what to do dofferent with it, but maybe play a little bit more with colors in the next few breadth pieces. Good work :)
i love the balance of the dark and light parts! also the light behind the chair
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This is a really creative, high quality picture and it looks way better than the other day (maybe because there was a glare on your computer or something like that). I like how there are a variety of tones and the lighting is really eerie but in a good way. The only thing that I would consider is the blank wall in the back...that's it though (maybe darken the shadow on that wall). I like how you are drawn into the room and how the is a meaning to it (there may not be a meaning but it looks like there could be...which is a positive). Keep up the good work and think about using a different style for your next breadth pieces.
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From Tina:
ReplyDeleteI really like it- the color, the light, and the overall feeling this picture evokes. The partially shown room draws the viewer in, it makes you want to know what's going on. I think it's such a creative idea for "room perspective" and very near perfect too. To improve, maybe something can be done to fix the emptiness of the left wall? thats all I can really think of... but I like it the way it already is.
The lighting in the interior of the room really draws you into the space, but the wall sort of blocks the viewer out at the same time which creates an interesting tension. I don't have a sense of clutter or hoarding as you talked about the photo, something like that could really make an interesting photograph.
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ReplyDeletethe texture on the wall and the ground is great, and the picture is detailed. and the empty space on the left nicely balanced the picture. but the part at the bottom maybe a little bit too dark?
ReplyDeletegood job:)
The pattern of light on the carpet really gives your eye a focal point. The texture of the bricks, the carpet, and the door add a lot of detail. The light and dark also makes the picture look complicated and interesting. I like how the room is partially concealed by the wall, because it makes me really curious about what's inside the room behind the wall. The space of carpet behind the chair is a little bit empty, and it might seem more complex with a few more plastic bags to clutter the space. I really like the picture!
ReplyDeleteI love this photo! It has a great balance and contrast. The light from the window and on the floor makes it really interesting. I also like the different texture of the walls. My favorite part is the the angle of the shot, it has a direction and makes me wonder what's behind the wall. This is a really great photo :)
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